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2018托福考试经验:托福写作常见的病句整理

更新时间:2018-09-29 16:09:30点击次数:553次字号:T|T
1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

2. For example, you work in a big factory。

改进: Suppose you work in a big factory。

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life。

6. Their brain is still very young。

改进: They are still immature。

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

改进: They cannot tell right from wrong。

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。

改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time。

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life。

改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development。

改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development。

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。

改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。

改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。
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